Month: July 2026

Good Writing Book Review

36 Ways to Improve Your Sentences

Good Writing by duo Neal Allen and Anne Lamott belongs in every writer’s personal library. Originally a check-out from the local public library, my own copy should arrive soon. That’s how much I like this book.

I struggle to read non-fiction. This self-help guide defies this generalization. Perhaps, the annotation by Anne on Neal’s 36 rules appealed to me most. Or maybe the commonsense presentation kept me turning the page. Regardless of why, Good Writing engaged this lover of fiction.

36 Rules of Thumb

Sadly, I did not grow up learning grammar through the Shurley Method as did my youngest two offspring. So, I struggle. Seldom will I use either who or whom. The same holds for lie or lay.

Good Writing goes far beyond good grammar. The authors concentrate on sentence structure. Eliminating passive voice is the subject of Rule 3: Keep it Active. I often fail with this.

Rule 9: Question Transitions contradicts the writing skills my kids were taught in school. Back then each new paragraph started with a transition. Am I splitting hairs too much? The SEO engine also stresses transitions. So, there is a bit of confusion here.

Good Authors and Good Writing

 

The repartee between Neal and Anne resonated with me. (Oops, repartee may violate Rule 5-but I can’t think of a better word.) They are a couple of veteran writers first, and soul mates second. Genuine respect and care flow in their writing. And the writing is truly continuous.  And yes, I am breaking so many rules. Hence the ordered book.

The higher numbered rules prove even more difficult to incorporate into my writing. I plan to try harder. Rule 26: Show Then Tell and Rule 24: Crystallize Your Dialogue challenge this struggling writer. Both chapters deserve another read.

 

 

Recommendation for Good Writing

I think Allen and Lamott hit the target with Good Writing. Every household with students needs a copy. The book benefits office workers as a handy reference guide whether they write memos or reports. I suggest all readers, writers, students, teachers, parents and grandparents buy a copy now!

No One Knew Book Review

New to Me Author

No One Knew is my first Kendra Elliot novel. Elliot is a prolific writer, and her engaging style shows why she is popular. The second in the Noelle Marshall series, No One Knew stands alone. Even if the first novel served as an introduction to the main characters, as a new series, the reader does not have much to catch up on.

Intertwining Plots

Multiple murders are investigated as parts of two plots. The first involves a teenager. Emma Chambers discovers a body while searching for cans and bottles to collect the deposit money. Assigned to the case is Deschutes County sheriff’s detective Noelle Marshall.

Simultaneously, Max Rhodes, an FBI agent, and partner Mercy Kilpatrick receive a warning of a possible terrorist attack. Dead bodies soon follow. Eventually, the two cases merge due to forensic findings.

The author twists the plot even further providing more background into Rhodes’ character history as well as an action-packed suspenseful ending.

Point of View

Multiple characters provide points of view. Emma Chambers gives a unique perspective. One that comes with years of abuse from an anti-government father. Marshall and Rhodes offer law enforcement beliefs. And personal involvement. The author uses italics and parenthesis to separate thought and action. Overall, the approach works. The reader becomes invested in multiple characters and fears for the survival of each.

Setting of No One Knew

Deschutes County, Oregon, the newest county in the state is the setting for No One Knew. Away from the beaches and the tourists, this location is a perfect backdrop for a series. The author can create characters with depth and personality.

Recommendation for No One Knew

I enjoyed this recent library check-out. The book provides entertainment without the need to do much more than open the cover. Individuals preferring law enforcement themes will like the characters as well as the themes. Look for this new release at your local library.

Catching Up: End June 2026 and Begin July 2026

Too Much to Do

Noise all day.

An overpacked June 2026 caught me behind and now I am catching up. The first three weekends involved out-of-state travel. Both business and pleasure encompassed the first two trips and the last was pure pleasure as we met our newest grandchild.

Squeezing chores in during the weekdays became more challenging as the month churned on. Furthermore, infrastructure improvements to the gas lines in the neighborhood filled the air with construction noises. I endured lots of beeps of backward moving equipment along with grinding engines and power tools breaking apart concrete. Hard hats knocking on doors and controlling traffic. However, once complete, peace of mind will compensate for June 2026’s distractions.

Catching up in the Garden

Weeds spring up daily. While raised row gardening protects the Big Garden, the side garden, back patio, front walkway rock garden and the newest garden strip are under attack. Grasses remain the primary culprit. Fireweed, goat heads and bindweed show up as well.

Two young helpers pop by from time to time as swim practice and ball games allow. They also watered on the weekends. Neither they nor their parents know that a former garden helper won the Boettcher scholarship after moving away from here. Good work habits start early.

Reading in June 2026

I used flight time for catching up on my reading. Look out for reviews of It’s Not Her, No One Knew, and Good Writing. And yes, I must improve.

More Catching Up To Do

Work in the quilt room still lags behind. The gardening takes precedence. Cherry harvest finished on the day it usually starts. Lettuce bolted early and the heat makes pulling weeds after 9:30 a.m. unhealthy.

Planting sweet potato slips may “slip” by. Peanuts struggle from lack of natural irrigation. As do all the plants. Mother Nature beats the water hose hands down.

Looking Forward

Only one major trip in July. The Zonta International Convention is in Vancouver. Women (and a few men) will travel from 65 countries to decide the future of this organization devoted to improving the status of women worldwide. I am excited! Look forward to pictures in the July 2026 Wrap-Up…on time, I hope.